tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-72316245999049873.post942772335137309058..comments2023-10-29T08:13:58.587+00:00Comments on Fire Byrd: Night Duty ( short story)Fire Byrdhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05477692359400671374noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-72316245999049873.post-8028039674746806462010-08-11T14:07:24.865+01:002010-08-11T14:07:24.865+01:00Late as usual, but I loved this little story! LOL ...Late as usual, but I loved this little story! LOL Tired minds tend to wander, don't they?nitebyrdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04967190902623933068noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-72316245999049873.post-43249423666697858122010-08-03T03:02:07.258+01:002010-08-03T03:02:07.258+01:00Forget about THEM breathing......I was happy to dr...Forget about THEM breathing......I was happy to draw in the breath I was holding when I got to the end!<br /><br />Wow.<br />NOT what I was expecting.....LOLMelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14408403855260279799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-72316245999049873.post-38747783326813128202010-08-01T03:31:28.599+01:002010-08-01T03:31:28.599+01:00Oh this is so good - loved it. I could almost hear...Oh this is so good - loved it. I could almost hear them let their breaths go when they realised who it was, when all their fear evaporated.Marilyn & Jeffhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00851884880790561276noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-72316245999049873.post-82650740966685809642010-08-01T00:23:34.303+01:002010-08-01T00:23:34.303+01:00ah Mandy, more talent lurks beneath that quiet ex...ah Mandy, more talent lurks beneath that quiet exterior...perhaps a poety bus is stopping at your corner.Beatnhearthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14825208509765183528noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-72316245999049873.post-33882742560541708772010-07-31T20:19:37.282+01:002010-07-31T20:19:37.282+01:00LOL
Love it!
xxLOL<br />Love it!<br /><br />xxZanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12352913358894157685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-72316245999049873.post-433607698371595672010-07-31T19:30:00.610+01:002010-07-31T19:30:00.610+01:00I ameasily frightened, do u know that. I hold my b...I ameasily frightened, do u know that. I hold my breath too...<br />Love it. You tease with words. I agree with Helen...Paulahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07241317042459836045noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-72316245999049873.post-81858308782434868932010-07-31T18:33:03.347+01:002010-07-31T18:33:03.347+01:00Very nice, Ms. Byrd! Have you ever participated i...Very nice, Ms. Byrd! Have you ever participated in Magpie Tales or the Poetry Bus? I think you would enjoy the challenges. I don't consider myself a writer, but others are very forgiving and generous! Do think about it. The Poetry Bus has a different driver each week ... if you need more info, just ask. Magpie Tales is just that and an easy to find blog.Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.com